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PostSubject: Poetry...!!   Wed Jan 02, 2013 3:36 am

Soo, i have a huge interest in poetry, and i wanna see what you guys know, like and/or wanna know about it, post youre favorite fragments here, or tell me something about your taste on writers, or just ask for some specifc poetry if you cant find it, you can even post self-made poetry Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry...!!   Thu Jan 03, 2013 5:27 pm

idk u anyone may like it or not but this is what i have hope u like it ^-^
God is the greatest artist
To whom no one can compare,
Streaking sunsets very beautiful,
Painting rainbows in the air.

Brushing green the hillside scene,
Blotting blue the sky above,
Splashing flowers 'cross the ground beneath,
Shading white clouds with His glove.

Of the wonders God has made
There is none that is so fair
As the smile He paints upon your face
When you realize He's there.

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PostSubject: Re: Poetry...!!   Thu Jan 03, 2013 5:29 pm

lol yeah god is the best painter Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry...!!   Thu Jan 03, 2013 9:58 pm

a song a verse
a rhyme no curse
these thing rehersed
thru time untold
the story's told
bout man and Girl
and Love's recurl
Gone r days when love was true
these are days where love is few
Try Young people tho
they do
Love Is oftten lost

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PostSubject: Re: Poetry...!!   Thu Jan 03, 2013 10:18 pm

thats a lot of words to say usualy young love doesnt end well
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry...!!   Fri Jan 04, 2013 1:47 pm

God's Flight
On the ground sits a bird
that's too afraid to fly.
Beautiful wings could make it soar,
but the pain of past failure is it's lonesome cry.

God has said unto this bird,
"Trust and have faith in me,
for I will carry you in your flight.
The miracle of life is waiting for you to see."

The bird said to God, "But I can't fly.
I am weak. I will fall and feel pain
It's happened before when I tried to fly.
I'm afraid of being hurt again."

His voice soft and reassuring, God said to the bird,
I created you, and I will protect you.
Your lonesome cry I have heard.
Have faith in me. That's all you need to do.

So, stand up, bird, and spread your wings.
The wings I lovingly created to let you fly.
If you fall I'll pick you up,
and lift you back into the sky."

With trembling legs and unsure wings
the bird finally looked to the sky.
It took a deep breath, and took the chance.
The bird began to fly.

"Thank you, God, for believing in me.
Thank you for giving me wings.
Thank you for your protecting hands.
Your glory I will now sing."

God smiled unto the bird
in its majestic flight.
"Little bird, I'll always be with you,
and will protect you with all my might.

You may stumble. You may fall.
That doesn't mean that I don't care.
I will watch over you, in case you need help,
and then I'll be right there."

The little bird, once so scared,
learned to soar to new heights.
The occasional fall no longer scared the bird,
choosing to have faith in Gods flight.

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PostSubject: Re: Poetry...!!   Fri Jan 04, 2013 2:12 pm

those are beautiful words, its a shame its such a big lie
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry...!!   Mon Jan 07, 2013 9:59 am

You give to me hope
And help me to cope
When life pulls me down
You bring me around

You teach me to care
And help me to share
You make me honest
With kindness the best

From you I learned love
With grace from above
It's for you I live
And I want to give

You are the reason
That fills each season
When I hear love I think of you
You are my world and best friend too

I love you because you are so kind, thoughtful and caring
I love you because you are so pleasant, lovely and sharing

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PostSubject: Re: Poetry...!!   Mon Jan 07, 2013 10:32 am

Roses are red violets are blue(purple) f**k with me and I'll shoot you.
Simple as that
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry...!!   Mon Jan 07, 2013 8:21 pm

Lol i think Poison's was my favorite
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry...!!   Mon Jan 07, 2013 9:25 pm

Listen to the silence,
Feel the breeze embrace,
Look into the stars,
look into the moon.

Tell me what you feel.
Does it make you calm,
Are you safe under the King of night,
Are you safe with me?

Tell me everything you know.
Give up your deepest secrets.
My arms are open to you.
Imagine me as your world.

Because I wont let you fall.
I will keep you up.
I will reach your every call.
No hope to ever giving you up.
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry...!!   Mon Jan 07, 2013 9:50 pm

nices ^-^

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PostSubject: Re: Poetry...!!   Mon Jan 07, 2013 9:50 pm

Smile


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PostSubject: Re: Poetry...!!   Mon Jan 07, 2013 10:22 pm

ur relly good Kunoru ^-^

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PostSubject: Re: Poetry...!!   Wed Jan 09, 2013 12:27 am

WOw YOU GUYS ARE ALL REALLY GOOD!

Here is my addition....I warn you its a little dark, I wrote it when I was a different person....The thing is when you read my poem you will see its a little strange for the tempo changes. Usually I read this one out loud so that you can understand how im feeling in each line. Yet if you have ever felt what I felt I am sure you guys can figure it our for yourself. Once more its a little Dark.

The Descent Of My Sanity

Am I worthy to live a life full of love
For a moment or two I might sit here
And believe I'm pure as a white dove
Yet my moment will not last long
For Reality shall reemerge so strong,
Followed closely by my shrouded past
Reminding me that no matter what i do
Memories of my past shall always last
I know there's no gain without pain
But whats the point if I'm going insane
My life is constantly in turmoil
It's like someone placed me in hot water
And then they just left me to boil
It just seems that this depression
It's like another level of repression
I'm taking it all in letting nothing out
Suffering, thats what my life's about
They say that whatever goes up mist come down
But can some one please tell me
If it still is the same the other way around
How can I continue to deny
That my life as it is
Is nothing but a lie
How can I continue,
Continue to survive
When will I be ready,
Ready to finally die
All you posers I hate you,
you and your very wretched soul
Cuz you claim to feel pain,
when you never paid a single toll
I'm so shrouded by darkness
My own shadow consumes me
They were all cruel and heartless
When they didn't even know me
My search seems so pointless
Will I ever feel an epiphany
One that can rid my pain
And change my mentality?
I have some hope for now
But soon, it might leave me......

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PostSubject: wow!! carpe!!!   Wed Jan 09, 2013 1:48 am

that was amazing carpe!!!!!! i would love to see you post more poems <3 <3

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PostSubject: Re: Poetry...!!   Wed Jan 09, 2013 8:47 am

well it may of bin dark but it was relly good ^-^

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PostSubject: Re: Poetry...!!   Wed Jan 09, 2013 10:25 am

Makes me wanna draw
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry...!!   Thu Jan 10, 2013 10:34 am

here 4 u
The past you cannot forget or undo,
The future is all we can look forward too.

I wish I could have been there by your side...
For all the times you've weeped and cried.

Know from my heart, what I say is true...
That I hurt for the pain you have been through.

Never alone shall you be,
Someday, freedom you will see

May your hopes and dreams come true,
No matter where you are, I'll always be here for you.

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PostSubject: Re: Poetry...!!   Fri Jan 11, 2013 4:22 pm

Hinata I loved your last poem, made me feel really warm inside. =D

Here is a motivational one that I wrote a few years ago...hopefully its still okay.

Every year as u advance in ages
To ur book of life u add more pages
It records all of ur life stages
Since u were stuck in childhood cages
Till now as ur pursuing an education and ur dealing with wages
And I don't see what the rage is
Growing up is just outrageous
As u advance through the stages
U advance in capabilities
So u get more responsibilities
Ur stuck with high expectations
Failure has no explanations
It ain't no longer go big or go home
It's either u go big or u have no home
That might be quite an exaggeration
But the truth is still full of desperation
Know that Failure is never an option
But a sign of mental corruption
The world got to you mentally
So u let it all go physically
It's like suicide without the dying
Instead of fighting and trying
U ended up suffering and crying
That's wat failure be and wat it is
So for the failures out there
Pick ur head up and just hear this
Living your life to the fullest
Doesn't mean doing crazy things
To prove you're the boldest
But doing everything you do
And letting it define you
Bring life to things you do everyday
And bring life to all the words you say
Let the world know u won't be put down
Let a warm smile replace your frown
Cuz I was once a failure too,
But I took a chance to change for the better,
And I want you to do it too.

P.S. I know my spelling is horrid....ill edit it later lol

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PostSubject: Re: Poetry...!!   Fri Jan 11, 2013 6:11 pm

I guess ill post this, wrote it while i was on the train and couldnt sleep, started thinking about a certain someone and well here is the poem xD



I know that its bad for me
But poison tastes so good
Even when it tears me apart inside
Like only poison could

Its in human nature to want some poison
Whether its a person, an item, or a habit
You never care if its good for you
All that matters is that you have it

So you can go against human nature
Stop here and make your stand
But I'm gonna pick Poison
And go down with her hand in my hand
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry...!!   Sat Jan 12, 2013 6:57 pm

Lost Love

Void, empty, hollow inside
My dreams have fled, my hopes have died
Existence has no reason
Life's just passing with each season

She was my life, my hope, my love
All is gone, passed by thereof
The hurt is such no one should bear
What's to life, why should I care?

I weep all night for my love gone
My heart is sick, for death I long
Mine eyes well tears for love that's lost
I'll mourn always for the great cost

But in each day Lord give me hope
Strengthen me so I may cope
Grant me wisdom to help me see
Thy great way and not just me.

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PostSubject: Re: Poetry...!!   Wed Jan 16, 2013 7:26 pm

a glock a 9
all things are not fine
used to think i could be
smoething more than just me
not sure anymore that i have got
what it takes to to carry on
so pull the trigger yes or no
i got this glock in my hand

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PostSubject: Re: Poetry...!!   Wed Jan 16, 2013 7:57 pm

im not good at poetry
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry...!!   Thu Jan 17, 2013 2:03 am

TO: JJ

The night slowly creeping in
The American Flag waving high
The shots still ringing out
The stampede still pushing on
Moments captured
By the camera of time
The click of the shutter
Sits deep in the mind
An American, a soldier, a parent, a wife
Serving so proudly, laying down a life
Drawing the line between truth and lies
Trusting a leader foolish or wise?
No longer the power held by a few
Give the people what they are due
Peace, love, and harmony, does it exist?
Hard to see through the 9-11 mist
Random insanity or a plot so thick
Thought and time cut to the quick
A change on the horizon, Election Day near
Heads in the sand quacking with fear
The battle goes on a world away
Politics and pride still get in the way
Pull in the oars, bring home daughter and son
Eternity will pass until this war is won
The dollar is drowning in excess and greed
Yet the backyard is starving and bleeding with need
A solution to the puzzle of uncertainty and fear
So many lost already
Is the answer near?
Only time will reveal what the future will be
But time cost too much
To America and ME

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