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fedeheartZ
Posts : 18 Join date : 2012-12-20 Age : 28
| Subject: Poetry...!! Wed Jan 02, 2013 3:36 am | |
| Soo, i have a huge interest in poetry, and i wanna see what you guys know, like and/or wanna know about it, post youre favorite fragments here, or tell me something about your taste on writers, or just ask for some specifc poetry if you cant find it, you can even post self-made poetry | |
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DX Hinata Admin
Posts : 128 Join date : 2012-12-09
| Subject: Re: Poetry...!! Thu Jan 03, 2013 5:27 pm | |
| idk u anyone may like it or not but this is what i have hope u like it ^-^ God is the greatest artist To whom no one can compare, Streaking sunsets very beautiful, Painting rainbows in the air.
Brushing green the hillside scene, Blotting blue the sky above, Splashing flowers 'cross the ground beneath, Shading white clouds with His glove.
Of the wonders God has made There is none that is so fair As the smile He paints upon your face When you realize He's there. | |
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fedeheartZ
Posts : 18 Join date : 2012-12-20 Age : 28
| Subject: Re: Poetry...!! Thu Jan 03, 2013 5:29 pm | |
| lol yeah god is the best painter | |
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DX Rocket Admin
Posts : 255 Join date : 2012-12-06 Age : 32
| Subject: Re: Poetry...!! Thu Jan 03, 2013 9:58 pm | |
| a song a verse a rhyme no curse these thing rehersed thru time untold the story's told bout man and Girl and Love's recurl Gone r days when love was true these are days where love is few Try Young people tho they do Love Is oftten lost | |
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fedeheartZ
Posts : 18 Join date : 2012-12-20 Age : 28
| Subject: Re: Poetry...!! Thu Jan 03, 2013 10:18 pm | |
| thats a lot of words to say usualy young love doesnt end well | |
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DX Hinata Admin
Posts : 128 Join date : 2012-12-09
| Subject: Re: Poetry...!! Fri Jan 04, 2013 1:47 pm | |
| God's Flight On the ground sits a bird that's too afraid to fly. Beautiful wings could make it soar, but the pain of past failure is it's lonesome cry.
God has said unto this bird, "Trust and have faith in me, for I will carry you in your flight. The miracle of life is waiting for you to see."
The bird said to God, "But I can't fly. I am weak. I will fall and feel pain It's happened before when I tried to fly. I'm afraid of being hurt again."
His voice soft and reassuring, God said to the bird, I created you, and I will protect you. Your lonesome cry I have heard. Have faith in me. That's all you need to do.
So, stand up, bird, and spread your wings. The wings I lovingly created to let you fly. If you fall I'll pick you up, and lift you back into the sky."
With trembling legs and unsure wings the bird finally looked to the sky. It took a deep breath, and took the chance. The bird began to fly.
"Thank you, God, for believing in me. Thank you for giving me wings. Thank you for your protecting hands. Your glory I will now sing."
God smiled unto the bird in its majestic flight. "Little bird, I'll always be with you, and will protect you with all my might.
You may stumble. You may fall. That doesn't mean that I don't care. I will watch over you, in case you need help, and then I'll be right there."
The little bird, once so scared, learned to soar to new heights. The occasional fall no longer scared the bird, choosing to have faith in Gods flight. | |
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fedeheartZ
Posts : 18 Join date : 2012-12-20 Age : 28
| Subject: Re: Poetry...!! Fri Jan 04, 2013 2:12 pm | |
| those are beautiful words, its a shame its such a big lie | |
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DX Hinata Admin
Posts : 128 Join date : 2012-12-09
| Subject: Re: Poetry...!! Mon Jan 07, 2013 9:59 am | |
| You give to me hope And help me to cope When life pulls me down You bring me around
You teach me to care And help me to share You make me honest With kindness the best
From you I learned love With grace from above It's for you I live And I want to give
You are the reason That fills each season When I hear love I think of you You are my world and best friend too
I love you because you are so kind, thoughtful and caring I love you because you are so pleasant, lovely and sharing | |
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!Harpielady<3<3! Admin
Posts : 72 Join date : 2012-12-07 Age : 27
| Subject: Re: Poetry...!! Mon Jan 07, 2013 10:32 am | |
| Roses are red violets are blue(purple) f**k with me and I'll shoot you. Simple as that | |
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The King Of Darkness
Posts : 12 Join date : 2013-01-05 Age : 31
| Subject: Re: Poetry...!! Mon Jan 07, 2013 8:21 pm | |
| Lol i think Poison's was my favorite | |
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Amazon Lord Kunoru
Posts : 29 Join date : 2012-12-06
| Subject: Re: Poetry...!! Mon Jan 07, 2013 9:25 pm | |
| Listen to the silence, Feel the breeze embrace, Look into the stars, look into the moon.
Tell me what you feel. Does it make you calm, Are you safe under the King of night, Are you safe with me?
Tell me everything you know. Give up your deepest secrets. My arms are open to you. Imagine me as your world.
Because I wont let you fall. I will keep you up. I will reach your every call. No hope to ever giving you up. | |
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DX Hinata Admin
Posts : 128 Join date : 2012-12-09
| Subject: Re: Poetry...!! Mon Jan 07, 2013 9:50 pm | |
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Amazon Lord Kunoru
Posts : 29 Join date : 2012-12-06
| Subject: Re: Poetry...!! Mon Jan 07, 2013 9:50 pm | |
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DX Hinata Admin
Posts : 128 Join date : 2012-12-09
| Subject: Re: Poetry...!! Mon Jan 07, 2013 10:22 pm | |
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Carpe_Diem Admin
Posts : 106 Join date : 2012-12-06 Age : 32 Location : Paterson, NJ
| Subject: Re: Poetry...!! Wed Jan 09, 2013 12:27 am | |
| WOw YOU GUYS ARE ALL REALLY GOOD!
Here is my addition....I warn you its a little dark, I wrote it when I was a different person....The thing is when you read my poem you will see its a little strange for the tempo changes. Usually I read this one out loud so that you can understand how im feeling in each line. Yet if you have ever felt what I felt I am sure you guys can figure it our for yourself. Once more its a little Dark.
The Descent Of My Sanity
Am I worthy to live a life full of love For a moment or two I might sit here And believe I'm pure as a white dove Yet my moment will not last long For Reality shall reemerge so strong, Followed closely by my shrouded past Reminding me that no matter what i do Memories of my past shall always last I know there's no gain without pain But whats the point if I'm going insane My life is constantly in turmoil It's like someone placed me in hot water And then they just left me to boil It just seems that this depression It's like another level of repression I'm taking it all in letting nothing out Suffering, thats what my life's about They say that whatever goes up mist come down But can some one please tell me If it still is the same the other way around How can I continue to deny That my life as it is Is nothing but a lie How can I continue, Continue to survive When will I be ready, Ready to finally die All you posers I hate you, you and your very wretched soul Cuz you claim to feel pain, when you never paid a single toll I'm so shrouded by darkness My own shadow consumes me They were all cruel and heartless When they didn't even know me My search seems so pointless Will I ever feel an epiphany One that can rid my pain And change my mentality? I have some hope for now But soon, it might leave me...... | |
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Lady_Khajiit <3
Posts : 21 Join date : 2013-01-02 Age : 29 Location : Dallas Tx.
| Subject: wow!! carpe!!! Wed Jan 09, 2013 1:48 am | |
| that was amazing carpe!!!!!! i would love to see you post more poems <3 <3 | |
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DX Hinata Admin
Posts : 128 Join date : 2012-12-09
| Subject: Re: Poetry...!! Wed Jan 09, 2013 8:47 am | |
| well it may of bin dark but it was relly good ^-^ | |
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!Harpielady<3<3! Admin
Posts : 72 Join date : 2012-12-07 Age : 27
| Subject: Re: Poetry...!! Wed Jan 09, 2013 10:25 am | |
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DX Hinata Admin
Posts : 128 Join date : 2012-12-09
| Subject: Re: Poetry...!! Thu Jan 10, 2013 10:34 am | |
| here 4 u The past you cannot forget or undo, The future is all we can look forward too.
I wish I could have been there by your side... For all the times you've weeped and cried.
Know from my heart, what I say is true... That I hurt for the pain you have been through.
Never alone shall you be, Someday, freedom you will see
May your hopes and dreams come true, No matter where you are, I'll always be here for you. | |
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Carpe_Diem Admin
Posts : 106 Join date : 2012-12-06 Age : 32 Location : Paterson, NJ
| Subject: Re: Poetry...!! Fri Jan 11, 2013 4:22 pm | |
| Hinata I loved your last poem, made me feel really warm inside. =D Here is a motivational one that I wrote a few years ago...hopefully its still okay. Every year as u advance in ages To ur book of life u add more pages It records all of ur life stages Since u were stuck in childhood cages Till now as ur pursuing an education and ur dealing with wages And I don't see what the rage is Growing up is just outrageous As u advance through the stages U advance in capabilities So u get more responsibilities Ur stuck with high expectations Failure has no explanations It ain't no longer go big or go home It's either u go big or u have no home That might be quite an exaggeration But the truth is still full of desperation Know that Failure is never an option But a sign of mental corruption The world got to you mentally So u let it all go physically It's like suicide without the dying Instead of fighting and trying U ended up suffering and crying That's wat failure be and wat it is So for the failures out there Pick ur head up and just hear this Living your life to the fullest Doesn't mean doing crazy things To prove you're the boldest But doing everything you do And letting it define you Bring life to things you do everyday And bring life to all the words you say Let the world know u won't be put down Let a warm smile replace your frown Cuz I was once a failure too, But I took a chance to change for the better, And I want you to do it too. P.S. I know my spelling is horrid....ill edit it later lol | |
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The King Of Darkness
Posts : 12 Join date : 2013-01-05 Age : 31
| Subject: Re: Poetry...!! Fri Jan 11, 2013 6:11 pm | |
| I guess ill post this, wrote it while i was on the train and couldnt sleep, started thinking about a certain someone and well here is the poem xD
I know that its bad for me But poison tastes so good Even when it tears me apart inside Like only poison could
Its in human nature to want some poison Whether its a person, an item, or a habit You never care if its good for you All that matters is that you have it
So you can go against human nature Stop here and make your stand But I'm gonna pick Poison And go down with her hand in my hand | |
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DX Hinata Admin
Posts : 128 Join date : 2012-12-09
| Subject: Re: Poetry...!! Sat Jan 12, 2013 6:57 pm | |
| Lost Love
Void, empty, hollow inside My dreams have fled, my hopes have died Existence has no reason Life's just passing with each season
She was my life, my hope, my love All is gone, passed by thereof The hurt is such no one should bear What's to life, why should I care?
I weep all night for my love gone My heart is sick, for death I long Mine eyes well tears for love that's lost I'll mourn always for the great cost
But in each day Lord give me hope Strengthen me so I may cope Grant me wisdom to help me see Thy great way and not just me. | |
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DX Rocket Admin
Posts : 255 Join date : 2012-12-06 Age : 32
| Subject: Re: Poetry...!! Wed Jan 16, 2013 7:26 pm | |
| a glock a 9 all things are not fine used to think i could be smoething more than just me not sure anymore that i have got what it takes to to carry on so pull the trigger yes or no i got this glock in my hand | |
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cardgamesWTF
Posts : 121 Join date : 2013-01-12 Age : 26 Location : Earth
| Subject: Re: Poetry...!! Wed Jan 16, 2013 7:57 pm | |
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DX Hinata Admin
Posts : 128 Join date : 2012-12-09
| Subject: Re: Poetry...!! Thu Jan 17, 2013 2:03 am | |
| TO: JJ
The night slowly creeping in The American Flag waving high The shots still ringing out The stampede still pushing on Moments captured By the camera of time The click of the shutter Sits deep in the mind An American, a soldier, a parent, a wife Serving so proudly, laying down a life Drawing the line between truth and lies Trusting a leader foolish or wise? No longer the power held by a few Give the people what they are due Peace, love, and harmony, does it exist? Hard to see through the 9-11 mist Random insanity or a plot so thick Thought and time cut to the quick A change on the horizon, Election Day near Heads in the sand quacking with fear The battle goes on a world away Politics and pride still get in the way Pull in the oars, bring home daughter and son Eternity will pass until this war is won The dollar is drowning in excess and greed Yet the backyard is starving and bleeding with need A solution to the puzzle of uncertainty and fear So many lost already Is the answer near? Only time will reveal what the future will be But time cost too much To America and ME | |
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