Carpe_Diem Admin
Posts : 106 Join date : 2012-12-06 Age : 32 Location : Paterson, NJ
| Subject: Ode To Love Fri Jan 11, 2013 3:21 am | |
| This poem I am writing for a special someone. If you play close attention then you shall easily be able to figure it out. My poem will never be complete...Every week I will add a new part. Thus this is the first part. Ode To Love
What does it mean to truly love someone? When will you know that true love has begun? These questions can’t be answered easily. For only time answers them truthfully. And I believe now is the time for me, To express my feelings, as they may be.
BEAUTY
To each, beauty is viewed in their own way, For me to truly describe your beauty, Never shall I find the right words to say,
But alas I can express what I see, When I gaze upon you, sincerely, With nothing but love, flowing within me.
As I look into your delicate eyes, I see resilience covering pain. A pure soul hardened by half truths and lies.
And Yet I see your will to continue I see your will to live your life fully And I see nothing but love within you.
If that aint true Beauty Then what is? And Love, I really want you to know this
Now until I die you’ll suffer no more, For in my love, My whole soul, I shall pour. - A Heartfelt Apology:
Love, I'm sorry for what I said to you I would rather die than ever hurt you Love, believe it or not, that much is true I'll prove it with my words and actions too Love, the fact that I hurt you, I regret But I will make mistakes, I'm not perfect Love, if I'd personified perfection, You'd be the immaculate conception Love, you are the only goddess of my heart Everything I wanted, all in one part Love, I am not my counterpart, really For I see the beauty, in front of me Love, I will never be blinded by lust For I would rather die than lose your trust, Love, a perfect goddess Is what you are, Your own blood would not come up to par Love, I may not have an all seeing eye But I have love, that'll last until I die.
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Lady_Khajiit <3
Posts : 21 Join date : 2013-01-02 Age : 29 Location : Dallas Tx.
| Subject: i loveezz itt Fri Jan 11, 2013 3:23 am | |
| babe!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i love itttt u are soo getting laid tonight yayay!~~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! | |
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Carpe_Diem Admin
Posts : 106 Join date : 2012-12-06 Age : 32 Location : Paterson, NJ
| Subject: Re: Ode To Love Fri Jan 11, 2013 3:28 am | |
| Im really happy you liked it Love. But remember there is more to come. | |
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Lady_Khajiit <3
Posts : 21 Join date : 2013-01-02 Age : 29 Location : Dallas Tx.
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Amazon Lord Kunoru
Posts : 29 Join date : 2012-12-06
| Subject: Re: Ode To Love Fri Jan 11, 2013 9:51 am | |
| Nice poem carpe, lady is soooo lucky but ur pic ruined the mood, i think. ya know? | |
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